I've had some more time to make the changes from my audience feedback and even though I'm still not finished - i think this version is much better. Changing the plug area has really worked to add colour and interest and changing the advert has had positive feedback from my friends who are the target audience. I've also moved the lead story around and changed the headline, I have used alliteration to make it more attention grabbing and i took a long time to get the placement of the text just right to fit. now I need to to find time to develop the title a bit more and work on page two.
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